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Rose by Almy

You stood there weeping with a single rose in your hand, In the middle of railroad tracks. Why did this happen to you?! Did life hate you? You were already depressed, but No! Life just wanted to ruin your life, didn’t it?
What would it take for things to be quiet?
Quiet, like the snow.
I know this isn't much but,
I know I could I could be better.

You only had one friend, Wang Yao. A Chinese boy with shiny brown hair and a wonderful personality. It was the only thing that made you smile. He was the only one who had never called you names, such as one a boy with white hair and bright red eyes called you “Baby Bump”. He would cheer you up when you were down, he was the one who made you happy! You slowly developed a crush on him. Only hours ago, you had plucked a single white rose from your garden to give to him. Only, he didn’t take it. He was In love with someone else, a tall, intimidating girl named Anya. She was also one of the ones that made fun of you, in her own creepy way. Not only that, she told Yao to break up with you. How did you know? Because, you heard her say it once Yao had run away from you and your rose. You heard her approval in Yao. After that, you ran to the Train Tracks. You had planed your demise a long time ago, but you never did it, you wanted to wait for Yao. Yet, it looks like your death was earlier then it seemed. You heard a whistle from the distance. You smiled a watery smile. That white rose would soon be crimson.
I don't think I deserve it;
Selflessness find your way into my heart.
All stars could be brighter.
All hearts could be warmer.

You stood up and grasped onto the rose. You knew it was time, you had nothing to live for. Yao was the last thing holding you on, and Anya cut that string.
What would it take for things to be quiet?
Quiet, like the snow.
That we meant to be empty-handed
I know I could I could be better.

You suddenly heard a yell. It was Yao! And he was running to you, full speed. You stood still, paralyzed. You heard him screaming something. 
“______! _______! STOP ARU!” Yao said, his face showing extreme fear and worry.
But you couldn’t hear him over the roar of the train.
Oh shit. The Train!
You tried to run to him, but it was to late.
I don't think I deserve it, selflessness,
Find your way into my heart
All stars could be brighter,
All hearts could be warmer.

You had to make it, you just had to! Yao was coming back! For you! You tripped over a piece of wood, causing you to crumple to the ground, rose still in hand.
What would it take for things to be quiet? (Find your way into my heart)
What would it take for things to be quiet? (Find your way)

You only could do one more thing before the train hit. 
“YAO!!!!” You screamed, horrified. 
Then it went to black.
Yao stood at the train tracks edge, kneeling were you had once been.
“No…No…Not her…” Yao whispered. Then he noticed a rose on the ground, a single red rose. Yao looked at it horrified. It was all his fault, it had to be. He wasn’t worthy to be on the earth. He picked up the rose, and waited for the next train. 
What would it take for things to be quiet?
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Its sad, but its what i wrote, right?
I really wanted to write "VROOM VROOM MOTHERFUCKER" somewhere, but that would be bad.
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wiecute Featured By Owner May 30, 2014
Aw poor Yao, they both loved each other but then they died.
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SorryImOnHiatus Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yao.....Yao! DON'T YOU DATE STEP IN FRONT OF THAT TRAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It's so sad.....but it's a wonderful story. :cries: :clap:
....Until that bit at the end.......'VROOM VROOM MOTHERFUCKER'
I started to cry tears of laughter at that ^^;
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Xx-Bri-XX-Chan-XX Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014
Is it bad for meh to have a creepy smile after reading this..?
Cause im lik:
NOW READER-CHAN CAN GO HAUNT AND KILL ANYA!
HELL YEA!
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MixedMuttNeko-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Why did I just laugh after this?
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soursop4 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I read this after i just finished watching 'Wolf Children' and now I'm depressed and crying all over again. Great job -.-
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Moniker-Slash Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Crumpets, tea, and God Save the Queen, this is amazing! I love all your work! 
(Yeah... Lame substitute for cuss words, I know, but, hey, it's not a profanity or anything, so that's good enough for me.)
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Stormcloudthegreat Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
D8
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Female-Canada Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
... Other people are sobbing their heard out with this story.



I just have a creepy smile on my face...
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Nyoalice Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013
Well, me too.
Not creepy I think, but happy smile ( wtf Nyo ? ) :3

READER-SAN ! GO !
USE HAUNTED !
ANYA IS DEAD, YEAAAAH !
And now *out the chainsaw* :3
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Pika-PikaCuteness Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013
DEAR JESUS I MUST HAVE NO FEELS. I DIDNT CRY..BUT MY HEART SPLIT OPEN
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